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vandana
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0 posted 2010-12-12 05:58 PM



Softly
Softly
Love will find my heart
Will bring my smile back
Softly
Our song is playing
Softly
I will hear those words of love
Again in my heart
Let it rain softly
Against my window pane
Eacy day
I will find my way
To your heart
Each day and night
I'll light each candle
Every moment of my life
I'll make it happen
Through my life
I'll take each day
As my way to happen
Softly
I will wait here
To look for my love
Softly
I hear those words of love again
Softly

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Andrew Scott
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1 posted 2010-12-12 06:10 PM


Beautiful and smokin' hot . I think I need to go find the fire extinguisher.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
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2 posted 2010-12-12 06:44 PM


Take as much of me as you want,
Give me as much of you as you can,
We will merge the one with the other,
And make a whole from the pieces.

Yours was a beautiful piece, vandana, hope you didn't mind me chiming in.


http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/

Margherita
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3 posted 2010-12-14 09:33 AM


quote:
I'll make it happen



Softly beautiful and uplifting.

Love,
Margherita

ethome
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4 posted 2010-12-14 03:38 PM


Very romantic and beautiful expressions.
Peaceful loving write.

Eric

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2010-12-14 03:49 PM


So sweet and romantic...Well done and much enjoyed!
Lori

BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2010-12-14 11:26 PM


Sweet vandana~ This sure is pretty.

You always write so softly~


JamesMichael
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7 posted 2010-12-20 12:49 PM


A pleasure to read...James
Tim
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8 posted 2010-12-20 10:33 PM


enjoyed your poem.
2islander2
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by the sea
9 posted 2010-12-21 05:22 AM


gracious and loving, A sweet enjoyable read.

yann

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
10 posted 2010-12-21 09:00 PM


Vandana,

I'm so glad this popped back up again,
apparently I was not around to see it the
first time.



Merry Christmas, my friend.




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