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Life's course... |
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ILoveTheRain Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157GA 
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Float like the wind in air Feel your body at ease Relaxation overtaking, pulling you in… Drop like the rain in clouds Hit the ground with great force Bleeding out into the dirt… Shine like the sun in summer Dry the blood, clean it up Feel the warmth… Sparkle like the stars at night The feeling of victory Takes its course…again and again |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Hah! Sometimes the aftermath of the "victory" just isn't worth the effort. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You two look like you might be up to some mischief.......I've seen that look before. You got that cat that ate the canary smile on your face. Really like this writing and I think it's an up and down relating of victory... Good stuff! Just having some fun you know. Eric |
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