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tattooedsweetheart07 Member
since 2010-07-11
Posts 86Pa |
Alone in the dead of night, I sit here looking up at the moon and stars, And ponder... If death would be, That bitter sweet relief I been dreaming about... With all these pills in my hand, And the alcohol here... Nothing seems to take away the pain... This pain I feel tears my soul apart, Leaving me with nothing.... But this empty shell of a person I once was And it eats away at my heart, Which is shattered in 1,000 peices... The days quickly turn into nights And the months just bink into years a a wink of a eye... I'm not as stong as you think I am, And I'm nothing like the person you thought I was... The torturing pain is killing me inside, Would death the answer I'm looking for?? I hear the voices of my friends calling me to come back, But the pain and suffering I been though is just to much to handle anymore... No one sees but I'm slowly dieing inside, And there is no way to turn back... What if death would be better? |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Deep emotive write love how you managed to pen a sensitive often misunderstood subject into beautiful verse. I tried several times to convey such feelings but usually comes out too dark and explicit. Well done! cheers vic |
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tattooedsweetheart07 Member
since 2010-07-11
Posts 86Pa |
I just write what I feel, sometimes what I write kinda bugs people but I can't help that I write what I feel |
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