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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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0 posted 2010-12-09 01:27 PM

I watch you sleeping
Early in the morning
Your gentle rhythmic snore
Beckons me closer
To the length
Of your warmth
My lips lightly
Upon your shoulder
My hands resisting
Caressing you awake
Before the coffee
Is ready

LGR©12/9/10

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

1 posted 2010-12-09 01:42 PM

Oh Lori, this is so tender! I love it... those magic, cozy, snuggly moments in the morning... the height of intimacy, really. Bravo!

Amaryllis

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2010-12-09 01:44 PM

Amaryllis thank you so much for your kind words.

Lori

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

3 posted 2010-12-09 03:08 PM

Beautiful photo.

Oh boy, did you ever visualize in this poem, Lori. Yes, indeed, before coffee is ready. Yep. Whew.

http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2010-12-09 03:14 PM

Thanks Jerry! Lori

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

5 posted 2010-12-09 03:20 PM

This is a sweet way to wake up in the morning. A very nice poem.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2010-12-09 03:28 PM

Thanks Earl. Lori

flash
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since 2010-11-28

Posts 213
miami beach, florida

7 posted 2010-12-09 06:00 PM

Hello Lori: Wow..when I snore, the lady moves quickly to other side of the bed--or if really bad--she'll spring out of bed and pour HERSELF a cup of coffee!

Ha! Glad your man's snore is gentle & rhythmic!

nice read!

Al

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2010-12-09 08:43 PM

Thanks Al

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

9 posted 2010-12-10 12:57 PM

What happens after the coffee is ready?

Enjoyed.

-Trina.

You'd be surprised by the pain I can imagine inflicting and receiving.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
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10 posted 2010-12-10 06:43 AM

LOL Trina! I'll have to save that for a post in a different forum

Lori

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

11 posted 2010-12-10 08:57 PM

This is the you I want to be!

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

12 posted 2010-12-11 12:18 PM

My wife just hits me when I snore.

Enjoy that coffee... hot or cold.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Alison

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13 posted 2010-12-11 12:36 PM

I enjoy peeking into your life. And ... I want coffee!

A

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

14 posted 2010-12-12 07:34 AM

Sunshine-this is the me I'm glad I am!

____________________________________________
Andrew Scott-sorry 'bout your luck dude and we do know how to enjoy a cup of coffee

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Alison- wanna be a fly on my wall? You'd be bored to death...Peek inside my head and that is a whole other conversation.LOL

Lori

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