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Bitter Sweet |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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I was fooled into believeing in love again dreamt it was true held on believing you knew but sometimes it's not about love and slowly you withdrew my heart in your hands soul spent in the dew of the first rain of the season that poured the bitter sweetness I knew so well and my spirit weeps somewhere in the mirrors reflection of the truth ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
I remember the song---"you tell such lovely lies, with your two lovely eyes!" Fooled into loving again, ah, the vicissitudes of the many faces of love! Be of good cheer, you are not alone in this. Loved the poem -- Art |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms king.. it seems there are seasons of love and like winter they grow cold and then another springs into view.. keep on keeping on babe |
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flash Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213miami beach, florida |
Angel4aKing: It's always bittersweet sad when love departs..esp when we are somehow fooled by disingenuous actions on the part of others. But daybreak always follows the dark.. love will return if we stay open.. nice read! Al |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Love. A four letter word. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
As the saying goes "Better to have loved and lost than.....  Hmm...I must've forgotten the rest.  I love your last stanza. Enjoyed. -Trina. |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
No wonder they say love is blind and people always fall in love too. Makes me think, why they say that. Fine writing.  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Gilead, Thank you so for your response and yes I know the song...Love does have many faces and is blind... Daaaark.... Thank you for gracing me with your presence and for the valuable insight...I think you just might be reading btween my lines here.... The winter may have passed and I may have missd the spring,,,,,but there is aways next season lol maybe I AM my own worst enemy!Flash, I am brinking on the day break after the darkness...thank you for stoppin by!!! Jerry, But of them all it is the most misunderstood..... thnx for reading....Trina, But to have loved and won ahhh now that could turn the bittersweet into the sweetest of sweets!!! Prasad Nataraj, Thank you for stoppin by to read, when love is real it just is, to be fooled by love is to misunderstand the love you are recieving, I think that is where I was going with this one!!! Thanks again for all of your comments!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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