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house of sixty rings |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I still ride down by there sometimes on a sunday afternoon before sun down and take the elevator up to the 21st where our white sand beach is still gravel I make some clouds for our sky after with a cohiba or fuente from cuba and can almost hear your laughter too as you would try to make smoke rings that would fit your fingers tightly so they would never slip off again and you could be the girl in woman skin not the woman in a penthouse prison that was our eden when he was in rio _____________ daark |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
I know whereof you are coming from here, daark. The webs we weave for excitement and pleasure sometimes are our undoing. Speaking from experience heah. Nice work. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks JP.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Smoke rings and laughter make for a very vivid memory ... high up close to the sky. Enjoyed this view, dear Poet. Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Vivid berings you.  |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
A Penthouse Eden. Intriguing. Enjoyed, always do. -Trina. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend ________________ ms sun, thanks special lady _________________ ms sinz...thanks babe |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I smile. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks little one |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS...The view from that window of yours is special, always. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
 "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thank little neighbor _____________ andrew, thanks amigo |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
If the `Cabinet of Dr. Caligari` were put into poetic form, this would be how it would appear - as a crazy topsy turfy maze of words where up is down and down is up. I got the impression that someone was blowing smoke rings in the clouds. But maybe I was just imagining it. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
eb...rooftop where we used to dance...someone else lives there now..but I still go there and smoke a stogie on occasion..thanks amigo |
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