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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Because she reads I will not write; there is no way that I could win. I fear she wouldn't understand the form of me laid out in book. I also fear her reprimand and see me as I really am: I know she'd blame herself. So do seek me on the shelf. I will not write because she reads; there'd be no way that she could win. My novel just might be The End. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
intense! |
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mikeandrew Member
since 2010-11-18
Posts 198 |
interesting poem i enjoyed it. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I just hope my mother never reads this.  Thanks to you both for reading. I'm gonna go look for the spirit of Christmas...I have no idea what I did with it.  |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
What a great way to say the novel is forthcoming. I could be wrong about that, but I am not wrong about the lines of this short, but packed with emotion poem. It is the most in your face poem I've read in some time. And I read a lot. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Check behind the sofa for Christmas. I left it there once.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You did with Christmas what you did with this poem. You've hidden it so long that it needs to be transformed. Let the bells ring let the yuletide be... just remember always one thing... you are...Serenity. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sigh. Two curtain ties, and a rather demonic looking incense burner/holder. Charly owes me a percocette. That sofa was damned heavy.  Maybe I should check IN the sofa? *shudder: Maybe not. *wince* More whine anyone? *laughing* I really do love you guys.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And ya'll know I had to look--I would have been imagining a mold monster all night. But nope--I'm pleasantly surprised. Just the usual amount of couch-crotch-rot stuff--a happier surprise than the random change or even a corroded ambiguous med. And Jerry, I just wanted to say thanks. You've been very kind to me, so I'll share a heads up--tomorrow night Tip's is having their WWOZ all star night. Not that I'll be there--but if you can still dance and stand all night, it's worth the mention. Hugs all. |
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