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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2010-11-28 06:20 PM


         Universal Consciousness

As when under an infinite Deep-Time
tapestry of clouds and stars,
November moonlight touches down
to become one with the darkness
  and each of our souls,
in the inextricable commonality of being
there is no absolute ‘self.’
We … are universal consciousness.

              --- b. e. adams (11/28/2010)


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2islander2
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1 posted 2010-11-29 04:47 AM


excellent and beautiful. It makes think and marvel...

yann

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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2 posted 2010-11-29 09:31 AM


I love this

quote:
there is no absolute ‘self.’
We … are universal consciousness.


Such wondrous simplicity. Enjoyed this.

-Trina.

"A heart that can't feel its broken- can't heal."

JerryPat
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3 posted 2010-11-29 11:13 AM


Yep. Constructive verses belying the normal concept of being an "individual," although I old that we do have minute traces of individual traits, ewe basically are the reproduction of the cosmos.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Prasad Nataraj
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4 posted 2010-11-30 04:32 AM


Fine writing, as always. Like the concept too.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

katahdin
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5 posted 2010-11-30 04:57 AM


Enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Martie
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6 posted 2010-11-30 01:11 PM


sometimes we humans feel so all alone...it's good to realize "the inextricable commonality of being".  Enjoyed reading this!

naturegirl
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7 posted 2010-11-30 06:46 PM


loved this as usual - you must have some pretty amazing skies where you are.
Marchmadness
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8 posted 2010-12-01 12:01 PM


There is no doubt in my mind that we are all connected in one way or another and hopefully learning from each other.  Beautifully expressed.
                                 Ida

Amaryllis
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9 posted 2010-12-01 03:17 AM


An interesting outlook, well-presented, with the moonlight...

Best~
Amaryllis

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Margherita
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10 posted 2010-12-01 05:03 PM


Enjoyed your vision and I agree. Wonderful write.

Love,
Margherita

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