Open Poetry #46 |
Simply Ordinary |
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Quiet the morning takes the song from birds and wakes the sweater of silence Who can disturb the air there? Wings fluff on the rooftop, diffused by sky and funnelled along edges of lavender where waiting is sweet and there's no need to fly. |
||
© Copyright 2010 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved | |||
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poem brings out the best in poetry. Your thoughts are always so warm and soft. Happy Holidays to you Martie~ |
||
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There is nothing ordinary about your poetry, miss. You can make the ordinary extra-ordinary as well as anyone....just like this! |
||
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Only you, Sis...can disturb air, because your dreams fly so high! |
||
crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
Thanks for reminding me to enjoy the simple things in life. Wonderful write. |
||
Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
OH, I can see this, Martie, so plainly and the fluff of feathers waiting on sunshine. Uncalculated beauty. Thank you for sharing. |
||
JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
This day is your day for nature and beautiful poetry concerning nature. Ah . . . "waiting is sweet / no need to fly." Yep. |
||
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful, Martie - as usual I might add. I've never thought of waiting as sweet but, yes, it most certainly can be. Helen |
||
Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Finest writing. One needs no flight to enjoy the beauty of nature. Great thought. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
||
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
"the sweater of silence" ... great image! '...diffused by sky and funneled along edges of lavender where waiting is sweet! WONDERFUL lines !! |
||
threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
your ability to make the ordinary extra-ordinary is what defines YOU as a poet, Martie. Very nicely penned, amiga! Jeff |
||
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You make the heart fly without wings, resting on mystic ground. Always perfection from you, dear Martie. Love, Margherita |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |