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Misty Lilacs
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since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

0 posted 2010-11-27 05:37 PM

morning has broken

clouds kiss the Sun's face
bird songs have all migrated
morning has broken

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2010-11-27 06:14 PM

Oh Marti, just absolutely beautiful!

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

2 posted 2010-11-27 06:32 PM

Thanks my friend!

ooxx Marti

I do the <color=orange><b>MS Walk</color></b> everyday!!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2010-11-27 06:40 PM

So pretty~~ Love the cloud kiss!!

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

4 posted 2010-11-27 06:46 PM

Thank you Blues. It's what the clouds reminded me of when I saw this picture.

ooxx

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

5 posted 2010-11-27 08:12 PM

I think I saw Cat Stevens perched up in one of those trees.

Very nice. Very nice, indeed.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

6 posted 2010-11-27 08:43 PM

This piece is a puzzle. That it is beautiful is beyond question. Still the line `bird songs have all migrated` intrigues me. To migrate means to go to a another part of the world regularly. I guess what you mean in this piece is that the songs have migrated to your place instead of leaving.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2010-11-27 08:46 PM

Now I'll have that song in my head all night, and tomorrow...and beyond.

Priceless!

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

8 posted 2010-11-27 10:50 PM

Nice work, Marti. I live haiku's and senryu's, and write them but hardly ever post 'em.

This is delightful.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

9 posted 2010-11-28 06:40 AM

Fine writing, picture would make a marvelous painting.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

10 posted 2010-11-28 12:46 PM

Thank you all for your kind comments! I take them to my heart and appreciate them so much.

ooxx Marti

I do the <color=orange><b>MS Walk</color></b> everyday!!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2010-12-01 05:19 PM

Oh my, what a picture, dear Marti, it is breathtakingly beautiful ...

morning has broken

yes, and in a spectacular way, in reality and in words.

Wow!

Love,
Margherita

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