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Open Poetry #46

"Eli Eli lama azavtani?"

Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

0 posted 2010-11-24 09:04 PM

Feeding poor
Blessing all
Loving more
Devine call

Teaching praising
Miracles performed
Holy raising
Sinners adorned

Disciples plenty
Followers too
Betrayals plenty
Including you

His crime
His offence
Fated time
To confess

Devine's rule
Swift coming
However cruel
Ultimate summing

Tortured beatened
Ridiculed scorned
Cruel distinction
Crucified Lord

Erect amassed
Hanging high
Final gasps
Final cry

"Eli Eli lama azavtani?"

c2010vduna

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2010-11-24 09:54 PM

"My God, My God, why have You forsaken Me?"

Many might cry that cry even today, Inspired...

But until we leave it all into His hands to
forgive, and allow, how will we ever know?

Good poem, I appreciated every line.

Thank you.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2010-11-26 08:49 PM

Nice...James

Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

3 posted 2010-11-26 08:52 PM

Yes very well done, a pleasure to read your spare rhymes as you so succinctly sum Him and His life/death up for us...wonderful

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My best~
Amaryllis

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