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If Ever You Were Mine
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If Ever You Were Mine |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
If ever you were mine Would reality be as rich as the dream or dry as the dust blowing across the Kansas plains If ever you were mine Would I always see you through stained glass love or would my heart shatter into a million colored pieces If ever you were mine Would we let the petty breakdowns of day to day living defeat us or let our love be that higher ground above the flood, our refuge If ever you were mine could the songs we sing intertwine become that perfect melody that perfect song that single perfect note I'd love to sing with you If ever you were mine |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Gorgeous poetry! Absolutely gorgeous!!! Such loving, sweet, sentimental terms of endearment. Yay...Bravo!!! |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Robert Goulet's golden voice came to mind when as I was reading this well-written ode to love, or at any rate possible love. Very nicely done. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Paula Long time no read. This is very nice. Romantic reality so to speak. At least you're throwing it out there both ways....Like Jerry wrote, it could be a Sinatra or Goulet song. Good writing! Eric |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Oh I agree with Bluesy... this is so lovely! And I love it as lyrics, too... smash hit material. It`s so sweetly said.  Amaryllis |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Great to read you, Paula! Very nicely done. Is all that glitters gold, once you have it in your hands? Good question, Can the reality live up to the desire? I like the way you present it! |
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2gabby Junior Member
since 2010-11-21
Posts 23 |
sweet, beautiful poetry. i identified with it. |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Fine mix of reality and dreams. Very dreamy write this. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Those that have never felt this way about someone, have never really lived. Nicely written and well spoken. Thanks for sharing. Peace. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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