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Perfectionist Webby
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Perfectionist Webby |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India 
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Perfectionist Webby Prevailing forever numbness under dark closet, Wanted now lay uselessly rested and dusted, Minute movements hardly pursue their share, Where she’s diligently spreads her modest lair, Tangerine out flashing titanium solid metal, Rubies, emeralds, sapphire rest on her crest, Teasing artistic mascara decorate those lashes, Pleasant stillness portray her wide temple, Withheld inner emotions, fine crafty juicy lips, Master sculptor hands chiseled her gentle shape, Delicate touches complete curvy slender drapes, Crossing knee strikes many vital vocal chords, Webby locks sway soothingly to tribal music, Ankles fiddle through her missing notes, Mesmerized victims foolishly dance their way, To her perfectionist fingers, weaver of webs. ©Prasad.N 17th Nov 2010. All rights reserved to Prasad.N "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enjoyed her prasad.. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Ah, ms. Arachne personified.. love this, Prasad! Wow ~Amaryllis |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Ahhh, gotta love it! . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just beautifully done Prasad, and great reading you again. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great write Prasad....Gotta love that! Eric |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, Dark. Glad you enjoyed her. Really appreciate it.  Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, Amaryllis. Yeah, got it right. It is about Ms. Arachne. Glad you love it.  Really appreciate it.Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, Jerry. Glad you love it, too. Really appreciate it. Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, Mysteria. Good to hear from you. Thank you for your kind words. Really appreciate it.Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, Eric. Thank you for your kind words. Really appreciate it. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Weaver of webs indeed....a widow, I presume?  Very nicely done, sir. |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, Sir. Thank you for your kind words, could be a widow spider, we really wouldn't know. Really appreciate it. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Leaves so much to the imagination, Ms. Webby is living up to her namesake... so lifelike and at the same time, so make believe. Great writing, Prasad~ |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, BluesSerenade. Glad to read your kind words, many things in the world are, make believe only. Really appreciate your comments. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Such a great weaving of words. I enjoy reading your poems again. Alison |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, Alison. That’s a great compliment from someone as talented as you. Really appreciate it. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
 Thank you. |
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