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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY 
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I should be happy for you. She gives you what you deserve you, with your magnificent heart and echoing kindness but it rips through my soul. Even so, I hide it well For every ounce of happiness you have, there is a tear I've shed silently. All the while commending her. I should be happy for you- I know, but Love is not always beautiful. -Trina. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Yep. Actually there are times when you shouldn't be happy for certain people. It's okay to hold onto hurts, just not so much that it controls you. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
What Jerry said. Sometimes love can get pretty ugly.  "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wanting what we cannot have is one of the toughest emotions around....no doubt about that. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"you, with your magnificent heart and echoing kindness but it rips through my soul." Ouch. I liked the entirety of this poem, but the lines above I really related to. Thanks for sharing this. |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
right to the nitty gritty as always...I love it. ebm |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Fine writing Trina, tough situation to be in, sometimes love itself is a toughest proposition. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...later things are clearer...James |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Jerry- Indeed, sometimes being happy for others is like a punishment- and you just have to let go. Andrew- Indeed. Balladeer- Perhaps its just human nature. Kaoru- Thanx for looking in.  Mae- I've never been one who beats around the bush  Thanx.  Prasad- Thanx. Eh, Love is sometimes too complicated to be bothered with. James- Thanx.  Yep, its always later when we see things clearly. -Trina. |
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AlexanderPoetry Junior Member
since 2006-07-31
Posts 30 |
Love is not always beautiful.... ah such a sweet line, or put in a better context, a bitter line written so sweetly. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Indeed, a bittersweet line. Thanx for looking in Andrew. -Trina. |
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