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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Beneath calloused tips of flesh strands of phosphorus copper bend and to their touch a soft massage all her pleasures lend Daring, dancing frets of dreams as if no boundaries lay between my hand runs down her supple neck she sweetly sings |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Doesn't sound like the blues you're playing, but it is sweet at any rate. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My brother Robert loved his Dobro... it sits in a corner of my room now... needing such strokes of love.  |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
This one definitly sings. Mighty fine, mighty fine in deed.  "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Excellent! You poem lends itself to some great times and to those lyrics of love.. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Being a guitar player myself I can relate and I have to say this is a great expression of guitar love! Eric |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
I enjoyed this very much... gorgeous writing!  Amaryllis |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Fine writing, Robert. Always envied people playing their guitars, so well. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
A beautiful treatment of the guitar in the musicality of a fine poem. I am a guitarist, and this resonates with me as I prepare to pick up my instrument, and play, perhaps, a strain of the "Sound of Music"! Great work -- Art |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Robert...beaufiful music is made that way. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
I've always envied people who can play the guitar. I'm so jealous haha Enjoyed this. -Trina. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
One has to love this poem - an artistic accomplishment. |
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