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Misty Lilacs
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since 2005-11-15

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White Birch Forest

0 posted 2010-11-18 01:49 PM

lonely

lone leaf on oak tree
hangs on indefinitely
wildness of wind blows

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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West Coast

1 posted 2010-11-18 02:20 PM

kewl stuff ms

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

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Spring, Texas

2 posted 2010-11-18 03:02 PM

Very nicely done...

jwesley

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

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Louisiana/America

3 posted 2010-11-18 03:23 PM

Excellent haiku. Perfect.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2010-11-18 06:15 PM

A very unique capture of lonely from nature's eye.

Eric

Misty Lilacs
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since 2005-11-15

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White Birch Forest

5 posted 2010-11-18 07:20 PM

Dark Stranger, thanks for the kewl reply.

ooxx

Misty Lilacs
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since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

6 posted 2010-11-18 07:21 PM

jwesley, thank you. Appreciate the praise.

ooxx

Misty Lilacs
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since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

7 posted 2010-11-18 07:23 PM

JerryPat, thank you. Although I appreciate your comment, not sure its the 'perfect' haiku.

ooxx

Misty Lilacs
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since 2005-11-15

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White Birch Forest

8 posted 2010-11-18 07:24 PM

Eric, while sitting today I noticed a lone leaf on one of my oak trees. It seemed lonely, I guess from nature's point of view!

ooxx

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29

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Bangalore,India

9 posted 2010-11-19 02:06 AM

Beautiful picture, fine Haiku. Captures fall season well.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2010-11-23 01:46 AM

Simply beautiful.

A

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

11 posted 2010-11-26 02:03 PM

Ah, but the lonely leaf was the last one...erm..."hanging".

Enjoyed.

-Trina.

"A heart that can't feel its broken- can't heal."

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

12 posted 2010-11-26 02:19 PM

Never give up! Liked the combination of picture and words.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

13 posted 2010-11-26 04:31 PM

..yess, the leaf perseveres to the very, very, last; much enjoyed your haiku..>>spiros

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2010-11-26 08:49 PM

Enjoyed...James

Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20

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Mi now

15 posted 2010-11-26 08:56 PM

I love the beautiful picture, and your lovely Haiku~!

.
Best~
Amaryllis

Misty Lilacs
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since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

16 posted 2010-11-27 09:02 AM

Thank you all for your comments on my haiku. I appreciate them so very much. Do you know hat little lone leaf is still handing in there? Very determined.

ooxx Marti

I do the <color=orange><b>MS Walk</color></b> everyday!!

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