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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Suntan Man Her skin looked as soft as velvet Her peaks & valleys sensually alluring. A smile that was sweetly pleasing. Her eyes and sighs deserving. "Yes darling, I can be your suntan man." JamesLee 07November 2010 |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
James You have this way of putting clever little twists in your writing. Suntan man.... I enjoyed this very much! Eric |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Clever writing James.  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Nicely done. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
"Suntan man" eh? At the risk of sounding like a wide eyed adolescent  I must admit that there is such a cuteness in this. -Trina. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kewl moves amigo..enjoyed it |
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