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X Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-11-07

Posts 1521
Oregon

0 posted 2010-11-03 02:18 AM

lover
let me open your pages one by one

let me scan your words
with my fingertips
with my tongue
with my soul

let me write upon your pages with a dark pen
marking your life with memories of you and me

and
us

lover
let me read your story over and over

let me whisper your words
to the wind
to the sea
to the sky

let me speak of you to the earth
so she remembers you and me

and
us

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2010-11-03 06:29 AM

Hey Heather that's beautiful romantic loyalty.

Good writing!

Eric

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

2 posted 2010-11-03 09:23 AM

Very tender and loving and sooo romantic! ebm

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2010-11-03 09:36 AM

OH Happy Day!

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

4 posted 2010-11-03 10:47 AM

. . . and we shall reap rewards untold. To wish that for a lover is to wish for those rewards untold. Nice work.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2010-11-03 11:39 AM

kewl romantica..enjoyed it ms

X Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-11-07

Posts 1521
Oregon

6 posted 2010-11-03 12:14 PM

@Nan - I told ya there was more

Thanks for the nice words guys. It's good to be back.

<3

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

7 posted 2010-11-03 04:17 PM

X Angel??? X Angel?? WOW!!! welcome back!!!

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

8 posted 2010-11-03 05:16 PM

Lovely, X Angel!

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

9 posted 2010-11-03 06:58 PM

I like it. You must have one hell of a lover.

Enjoyed this.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2010-11-03 07:02 PM

Good to see you Heather...and this lovely piece from your romantic pen.

Amberzlynnc
Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 229
New Jersey

11 posted 2010-11-04 01:12 AM

Very romantic

X Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-11-07

Posts 1521
Oregon

12 posted 2010-11-04 08:50 PM

hehe it's so fun to see the way each of you took this poem

to me it was more about wanting to remember something that you know will not last

le sigh

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