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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

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Watertown, NY

0 posted 2010-11-03 10:49 PM

Eros softly whispers her name
beckons her to come fourth
  "Love freely and procreate"
*Heed not his words*
Thanatos did say
*For I am the truth*
*After the day*
*All life must revert*
*to the inanimate state*
"Do not be blinded"
  "By his weary ruse"
   "Now is not your time"
    "Do not be fooled"
and yet she declined
to follow Eros still.

Eros and Thanatos
both offered their hands
one promised Utopia
the other - barren land.
As to which offer
she did receive
she was ambivalent
and a bit naive
Life is too short
So, Eros did not wait
it was decided for her
Thanatos now controls her fate.

*Eh, I might revise later.*

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2010-11-03 11:08 PM

Hhaha!! I'll be looking for the revision, but I have to say, I like this pretty damn good. Eros was a bit hasty, however. Still, that is how things work in the world of mystical beings. I liked it. Very much.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

2 posted 2010-11-04 08:50 AM

Yep, I'm with JerryPat on this one. ebm

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2010-11-04 08:53 AM

paths and pathways..decisions and consequences... I suppose, one chooses or has chosen for them at times..

always enjoy reading you ma'am..

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2010-11-04 11:31 AM

good stuff sinz..like you left it in pause mode...on an edge of view

Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

5 posted 2010-11-04 12:07 PM

You`ve got a good thing goin on here...!

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Best~
A

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

6 posted 2010-11-04 05:46 PM

JP - He was hasty but Life waits for no one.

Thanx for looking in

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

7 posted 2010-11-04 05:46 PM

EBM Thanx so much.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

8 posted 2010-11-04 05:48 PM

Cpat. Thanx. I agree, in the game of "Life" if we aren't fast enough - we'll miss out turn.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

9 posted 2010-11-04 05:49 PM

Thanx Dark, perhaps pause mode is fine for this piece.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

10 posted 2010-11-04 05:50 PM

Amaryllis Thanx for looking in, appreciate it.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

11 posted 2010-11-04 08:52 PM

Mystical, decision making leads to our destiny. Sometimes though, it finds us.

Fine writing.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

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