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Open Poetry #46

Out of Reach

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-11-02 06:32 PM

Out of Reach

Even though I broke-up with her
I wondered if there was
a soft place in her heart for me,
so I decided to approach her again
to see if she would reconsider
to be my friend.
I called her
and left a message,
three days later
she returned my call,
her mood composed
and not eager at all,
still politely she returned my call.
So we talked for a few moments
and I told her I was "thinking of her"
and I mentioned how much I enjoyed
our last visit to the beach
and she kind of laughed
like she was out of reach.

JamesLee
01November
2010
Vote

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

1 posted 2010-11-02 06:38 PM

Out of reach eh? Perhaps if you moved closer?

Enjoyed.
I noticed the "Vote" there, I already have

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

2 posted 2010-11-02 07:30 PM

Aw this is so sweet, sad, and resigned... I love the conversational voice.. fine writing, here

Best~
Amaryllis

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

3 posted 2010-11-03 05:53 AM

Act of a fine Gentleman. Fine writing James.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2010-11-03 06:12 AM

Can't like it when that happens but you put it down so well in words....The mood is just right.

Eric

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