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Prasad Nataraj
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0 posted 2010-11-02 07:05 AM


Warzone

Constant silent battle,
Between stillness and motion,
Character’s warzone.

©Prasad.N 2nd Nov 2010.
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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1 posted 2010-11-02 08:28 AM


Simple and to the point, with major impact. Enjoyed.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2010-11-02 10:32 AM


well described tension...

enjoyed!

Amaryllis
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3 posted 2010-11-02 01:21 PM


Well-said, Prasad!  So true...
Best~
Amaryllis

Prasad Nataraj
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4 posted 2010-11-03 05:39 AM


Thank you Trina, for taking time to read and comment. Glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate it.

Thank you Cpat Hair, for your comments. Glad you enjoyed it too. Appreciate it.

Thank you Amaryllis, for your comments. Glad you agree. Appreciate it.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

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