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Take Anything You Want From Me
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Take Anything You Want From Me |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Your honesty was the take on the matter the things that strike insufferable remain a brief novella in your history the church got all of your mother's money and her body leaving you broke with nothing left but passion the passion you brought to me refined out of forgiveness the same passion you would share with me in a world of lost art the art of true acceptance distinguished from all reason making my mysterious search for wholesome love, complete........ the first time I looked at your glowing freckled face I thought the freckles would be rough to the touch but you were so fresh and farm girl beautiful that I just had to try, had to somehow steal a stroke, a brush against your skin and when I finally did it was like touching the smooth open blossom of a lily and then our first kiss your lips were moist and full felt like they had been softened by a Godly sent sweet misty spring rain as you gave yourself to me without any apprehension My insides pushed my heart into my throat the magic that sometimes falls out of heaven captured us for the duration it was then I realized passion without love had suddenly came to be, against the rules of conscience oh how that kiss has never died now that same kiss speaks your mind with love it's familiarity, reminds me of your simple brilliance, accompanied by your angel scent and the treasure of a thousand smiles you always give to me free I gently break away and I have to tell you everything is alright you can take anything you want from me |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Oh the glow of tenderness of a fragile woman in the early times of life. I read this and Marionette’s face superimposed itself between my eyes and the lines of the poem. I was taken back to the pine thicket where we first . . . What a majestic and wonderful ode to amorousness. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Tender tinged m'friend you paint the emotions here not just the words or mere description... always a pleasure to read you |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
The poem is as precious as the woman written about. ebm |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
"it's familiarity, reminds me of your simple brilliance," Such sweet lines. Enjoyed this. -Trina. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank Jerry You stay away from that pine thicket! I wouldn't want you to get in trouble....Thanks for the kinds words on this.. Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Cpat I'm very glad you feel it's a pleasure as I can definitely say I feel the same when it comes to your work. Eric Thanks EBM Yes, she's very precious! I appreciate the comment. Eric Trina Thank you for mentioning that line. I appreciate the visit and the kind words. Eric |
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