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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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0 posted 2010-11-02 04:07 PM


Love and Sympathy
have similar warmths
but do not mistake
one for the other
for they are
of different colors
one red
one blue.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

© Copyright 2010 TrinaMarie73 - All Rights Reserved
Eusta B. Mae
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1 posted 2010-11-02 04:11 PM


Cool! ebm
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2010-11-02 04:12 PM


yep...you nailed it sinz..
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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3 posted 2010-11-02 04:32 PM


EBM, Dark - Thanx for the look see

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

JerryPat
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4 posted 2010-11-02 04:38 PM


Absolutely. You are right on again. I noticed you have been a member here since 2003. Have you been this prolific all those years. Short, to the point poetry that the reader need not get all that involved before it is over, and WHAM! you're hit with simplistic honesty. I really like your style and insight.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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5 posted 2010-11-02 05:06 PM


Thanx Jerry. I just started writing short verses recently. eh, perhaps its my laziness kicking in haha

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2010-11-02 06:27 PM


Enjoyed...James
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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7 posted 2010-11-02 06:33 PM


Glad you enjoyed James.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
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8 posted 2010-11-02 11:00 PM


another hit.You are on a roll. latearrival
Prasad Nataraj
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9 posted 2010-11-03 05:48 AM


Fine writing.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

ethome
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10 posted 2010-11-03 06:15 AM


Let's see now, I think I'm blusih red I think.

I'm a sympathetic ol lover......Comes with age you know. I sympathize with her because she's stayed with me for so long....

I really like this, you got it right.

Eric

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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11 posted 2010-11-03 12:52 PM


LateA - Thanx you're too sweet.

Prasad - Thanx so much.

Eric - lol "I sympathize with her because she's stayed with me for so long..." *smiling* Thanx for the look in.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

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