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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you were in the black shimmer high healing again not letting them whisper through the morning as if I didn't notice even the freckle there on your ankle while you cross leggedly ignored and sipped cocoa as if it were some secret brew that had a key fitting to smile your eyes I listen to the warm you said accidentally giving away that nonchalant like voter's leaflets then blushing at your own lady like with bold on when you pushed a smile and a look back glance into the rear view mirror of your curvy benz before patiently waiting for me to quit staring lest you drive over each foot step you left behind _______________ daark |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
D-nobody pushes a pen around like you do, what's the secret in your ink? ebm |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
You definitely don`t throw like a girl, Mr. Daark~~ enjoyed, as always!  Best~ Amaryllis |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I listen to the warm ... she's not the only one... |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Have to agree with the ladies, your pen is dipped in liquid, almost outlandish persona. Gotta love it. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ebm...thanks lady friend..dunno..it just oozes out sometimes.. _________________ A'mary, thank you for the glance dance ms ________________ ms sun, I know you enjoy the McQue' as do I..thanks for smiling babe ________________ jerrypat, thanks guy for the read and reply. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
cool stuff Sir.. a little staring once in a while is deserved whether they glance back or not. always a pleasure to read you amigo |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
P.S. Thanks for getting S&G`s `Canticle` stuck in my brain all afternoon~!  j/k |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
cpat...thanks for the eyes amigo. ______________ A'mary...nice to help fill your thoughts..anytime |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
daark Gotta love the look back.... Great stuff! Love the human end. Eric |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The glimpse from my rearview mirror never looked so good! Once upon a time~ Dang D~ ...I don't know which part to pick out because each line speaks to me in soft whispers. No one else pushes the envelope quite like you do! |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
fine writing. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
eric...thanks my friend _______________ babyblue...well there is this little bar out by the harley shop in camarillo and..thanks babe _______________ prasad, thanks for the read |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Its always fun to glance back, but I always look forward to the beautiful images you words paint. Enjoyed.-Trina. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sinz..thank you lady friend for the eyes |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Dark....I suddenly feel like a cup of hot cocoa, but not while I'm driving. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie.. and sit under the giggle boy tree and watch the sun touch blackbirds? would enjoy it too lil neighbor, thanks lady |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
stop starring...  have always loved reading you.... ~~**~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
it must be that hat Lady L...thanks babe |
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