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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2010-11-01 09:06 PM

Take a plunge
into my nothingness
where the world
is cast aside
and all thats left is
the sound of your
heartbeat
beating away
beneath my surface
echoed by
screaming silence
broken only
by your need
for air

So, go ahead
take a plunge
into my nothingness.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

1 posted 2010-11-01 09:09 PM

"Take a plunge into my nothingness." What a great line. This one is chalk full of something that is certainly anything but nothing. Me likes this one!

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

2 posted 2010-11-01 10:59 PM

How do you do it so consistently? I am impressed. latearrival

Winter
Junior Member

since 2010-11-01

Posts 10
On the autumn wind

3 posted 2010-11-01 11:01 PM

I just commented on your other one, and then I saw this. You are very talented!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2010-11-01 11:39 PM

I'll echo what everyone said above...

always enjoy opening your posts and seeing what you've left for us to enjoy

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2010-11-02 12:14 PM

Very nice I enjoyed the plunge.

Nice angle and well put down here.

Eric

Amberzlynnc
Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 229
New Jersey

6 posted 2010-11-02 03:54 AM

I enjoy every poem you post. Great work! Keep em coming.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

7 posted 2010-11-02 08:04 AM

Andrew - Thanx. I'm glad you like it.
LateA - Thanx. Eh, I was restless, and this just kept repeating in my head O_O If i could - I'd sleep underwater
Winter - Thanx. Truly appreciate it.
Cpat - Thanx, as always you're too kind.
Eric - Thanx. The plunge is exciting isn't it?

Amber - Thanx. Happy you've enjoyed, hopefully everyone walks away with something after reading what I write.
Thanx

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

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