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Open Poetry #46
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Zeigeist
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0 posted 2010-10-28 08:21 PM

Falling leaves...

Dying poets,
writing their last words
in the mid day air.

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1 posted 2010-10-29 09:25 AM

very nice.... the title did not lead to what I expected... your words however, are concise and paint a powerfrul image that fits well the leaves and poets.

enjoyed
Sunshine
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2 posted 2010-10-29 09:41 AM

Oh, excellent!
Eusta B. Mae
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3 posted 2010-10-29 09:53 AM

Loved it! ebm
Amaryllis
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4 posted 2010-10-29 09:55 AM

Beautiful simile... a gorgeous little poem, fine writing!
Best~
Amaryllis
Zeigeist
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5 posted 2010-10-30 12:37 PM

Thank you all for your praise of this poem.
Zeitgeist
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