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Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

0 posted 2010-10-28 08:21 AM

She wore her intimates
On the outside
Exposing her lonelies
To open windows
Letting wild winds
Blow through her
Let down hair
She gazed upon
The see through
Of her wistful
Wondering
If anybody
Noticed

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2010-10-28 08:38 AM

I am sure it would be noticed.....

very nicely done ma'am. This flows and has the same delicate qualities as both the lonelies and the intimates..

enjoyed

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

2 posted 2010-10-28 08:55 AM

Thank you sir, glad you liked it. ebm

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 2010-10-28 09:03 AM

It reminds me of "What if they gave a war and nobody came" type of thought. What is one exposed his/her true inner soul to the world...and nobody noticed or cared?

I would almost lay down my rhyming pen to be able to write free verse like you and Ron....almost.

Excellent work, my friend.

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

4 posted 2010-10-28 09:32 AM

OMG! Put me in the same sentence with Ron? Cover me up and elevate my feet-I'm going into shock! I can't hold a candle to that man. But I'm very flattered you think so. I envy you your talent, so I guess we're even.
Thank you for your more than generous complement. Eusta

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2010-10-28 10:22 AM

your voice is showing..nice view ms

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

6 posted 2010-10-28 10:37 AM

D- thanks for the eyes, glad you enjoyed the view.ebm

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2010-10-28 06:58 PM

And the men circle...

not everyone can attract their attention...

Enjoyed!

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

8 posted 2010-10-29 10:05 AM

~blushing~

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

9 posted 2010-10-29 11:24 PM

I'll just say that I love this and I do.

A

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