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Open Poetry #46

The loving attraction

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2010-10-28 12:13 PM

Leaned in the dissidence of stars,
Stronger than the gravitation,
The loving attraction without secret
Made me meet princess’s eyes,

Since I grip the anchor of Americas
As a boat in the moored whims
In your loving eyes and slaves
of spicy scents and rickety tropics,

The waves which rock me bitter and salty
are the ones of the open wide sea and of seasons
Those of the words written on polish of houses
Failing as the night of the ice-cold poles,

As these rivers in the elementary curves
I look for the ocean which will return me to you
In the capital of your eyes beyond the kisses
Without other pain than the desire of stars.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2010-10-28 07:26 PM

Hmmm, sounds like an old-time poem, Yann. Are we reminising a few centuries back?

Enjoyed! Thank you.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2010-10-28 10:31 PM

"Without other pain than the desire of stars."

and especially grand ending line!!

interesting 'write' !!

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

3 posted 2010-10-29 06:16 AM

fine writing.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

4 posted 2010-10-29 08:12 AM

enjoyed! ebm

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2010-10-31 11:20 PM

You bring a sense of calm to rough waters, and illuminate the stars in the night sky.

Nicely done, islander~

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