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Member Ascendant
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2010-10-26 12:08 PM

             Whirlpool of Time

Shed all vanities and fears.
Flow gently as the seamless seasons,
with the vanishing morning mists
and delicate traces of your dreams,
down these rolling hills and years
into the infinite whirlpool of

             --- b. e. adams (10/26/2010)

© Copyright 2010 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Eusta B. Mae
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1 posted 2010-10-26 12:31 PM

Shed all vanities and fears

easier said than done
but your words are true and inviting
enjoyed! ebm

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since 2008-03-10
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2 posted 2010-10-26 03:42 PM

It is good, Bruce, to return to the site and find your artistry and wisdom so various and beautiful as ever. Your poetic notion of time is far beyond any thing that the quantum physicists can ever imagine!



Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2010-10-26 09:28 PM

Oh goodness, this encompasses so much, what a nice rush this is to ponder.

You're a wonderful poet, Sir~

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since 2003-10-26
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Watertown, NY
4 posted 2010-10-26 09:49 PM

Wow, so much impact, with so little words. Enjoyed this.


"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
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5 posted 2010-10-27 03:20 AM

the joy of freedom! Well described even though hard to get there

Prasad Nataraj
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6 posted 2010-10-27 04:19 AM

Fine writing.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

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