navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #46 » Please Stay
Open Poetry #46
Post A Reply Post New Topic Please Stay Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-10-24 11:33 PM


Please Stay

"She told me that I
was driving her away."

Why couldn't I tell her
not to go, that there was
no way I wanted her
to go away.

Why couldn't she understand
that I would do anything
if she would reconsider
and stay.

JamesLee
24October
2010

OneFromThePast




© Copyright 2010 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2010-10-25 06:56 AM


I have been told before that I'm driving people away...really, anyone who has ever gotten in a car with me would never chance it again LOL

strange how that expression came about huh?

Brad Majors
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647
Georgia
2 posted 2010-10-26 06:15 PM


Even though it was simple I enjoyed this one a lot
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
3 posted 2010-10-26 09:57 PM


Ahhh, life is so full of "If only....." Enjoyed this.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
4 posted 2010-10-27 03:52 AM


a true love and a beautiful passion. thanks for the enjoyable read

yann

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #46 » Please Stay

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary