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easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

0 posted 2010-10-24 06:33 AM

October night (2 poems)

Outside, beyond
the corner of the eaves,
dark sky, darker trees.

How bright is the light
of a full October moon,
between dark branches!

Yuka
Member

since 2010-08-19

Posts 71
china

1 posted 2010-10-24 08:40 AM

enjoyed your beautiful october night.

on my side no moon no stars only rain day and night

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2010-10-24 10:32 AM

I think this is great but even better as one poem, easy1.
Ida

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2010-10-26 06:18 PM

I think you could expand this and post this as one piece. You have some wonderful imagery in here.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2010-10-26 09:21 PM

You are an artist with a keen eye.

Really nice, easy1~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2010-10-27 02:27 AM

nice work!

Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

6 posted 2010-10-27 05:39 AM

Beautiful Fall capture, easy

Best~
Amaryllis

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

7 posted 2010-10-27 06:31 AM

Nothing better than a full moon on a clear night, Enjoyed.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

8 posted 2010-10-27 10:57 AM

I agree it is one poem and a great one at that! The imagery is right on! excellent! ebm

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

9 posted 2010-10-27 11:07 AM

.

Very good

John

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easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

10 posted 2010-10-28 03:41 PM

Thank you all for your kind words.
Yes, I guess that it is one poem with two stanzas.

Thank you, Ida/Marchmadness for being the first to observe and record this here.

Hmmm...
Hopefully, Yuka, the weather in eastern China has since improved somewhat for Moon viewing.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2010-10-28 07:04 PM

Luckily, there's a vision to match your words...

Well done!

.
photo PiP property

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

12 posted 2010-10-28 10:48 PM

NICE!!!
Kat >^..^<

Bastet
Member

since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

13 posted 2010-10-29 02:09 AM

Oh, how beautifully, minimally Asian! Poems after my own heart. Thanks, easy 1.

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