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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Morning tip toes in the dark softly blushing cool condensation drizzles in the fog. Weather patterns paired with cream colored scarves red leather gloves and gray cashmere. Strung with silver strands draped and clasped. The noon day sun is a stranger among us it spies from a quiet corner retreating from the fall the clouds blanket the sky moving beneath a drift of down. Teal blues become the night fashioned in a black mist bejeweled with sapphires and diamonds at a glance glitter in the dark lining the sky in silky sigh highs. Warm fires burn down low as a southern wind kicks up gusting through my dreams flutters beneath my lashes leaving me ruffled. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh Miss Bluesy you still have that magic touch, and it just gets softer, and softer. Loved this: as a southern wind kicks up gusting through my dreams flutters beneath my lashes leaving me ruffled. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice work! |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
fine writing.  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A beautiful array of images and colors. Some parts so quiet and deep then others filling up the fore ground with rich colors. Last verse is very well done as a conclusion. Eric |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue, it is always a treat to read between your lines and look up your pen hem..who is that hottie in the photo? (grin) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Mysteria~ I am so pleased to have you read me, thank you for being here. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Brad~ Nice of you to stop by. Thanks. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Prasad~ Thanks for the "fine" reply, nice of you to say so. Much appreciated. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ethome~ I haven't heard from you in ages, and I thank you for taking time to read this. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh dear dark man~ You're sweet. Thanks for looking me and my ruffles up.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bluesy, it's always good to lay eyes on you and your poetry. It's been a long time! Welcome back! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice... you paint the weather quite sesnually..and the metaphor works smoothly always a pleasure to read and enjoy your words... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I thank you both so much, the pleasure is all mine knowing you were here. Very much appreciate your comments. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I get a sense from this, about a slow dance...and can see the gems sparkling in the moonlight! wonderful piece, and inspiring too |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Love these weather patterns, Blues. Lovely imagery, beautiful colors. Captures that exciting feeling of Fall. Ida |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"Teal blues become the night fashioned in a black mist bejeweled with sapphires and diamonds at a glance glitter in the dark lining the sky in silky sigh highs." in this one verse you expressed all my favorites~~ and yes what a lovely you in the new picture~~ hoping all is well!  M |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Truly beautiful, Bluesy gal! You see with eyes well attuned. Helen |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Te each of you, thank you ever so much for just being here. x/o |
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