Open Poetry #46 |
Getting to Know Her Better |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Getting to Know Her Better In less than a minute I knew I wanted to see her undressed, caress her breasts, come together get to know her better, but that would take time and a sharing of her heart and mine. JamesLee 27August 2010 |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
[This message has been edited by Ron (08-31-2010 11:03 PM).] |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
such a wonder James, a little perfection of sentiments... regards yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The "sharing of hearts", so good that you consider that, beyond the mere desire, dear James. Very enjoyable. Love, Margherita |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
A powerful write, so much said with so few words. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, Hawaii Man! I agree! It's best to have the hearts entwine before the bodies do! Aloha hugs, Linda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you nourzihane, 2islander2, Margherita, Earl and Earth Angel for the wonderful responses...and thank you nourzihane for the nice illustration...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now James...this is all you...and it's good to read you again. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful write James!!! and I love what nourzihane did with it.... j. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
powerful write! |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
The need to share your heart and learn of another's is portrayed beautifully, and in less than a minute too. Enjoyed this. -Trina. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great emotional rush at first and then a flow to the seeking of longevity in the relationship. .....Well done!! Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sunshine, jwesley, Brad, s1nfully and ethome for the wonderful responses...James |
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