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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2010-10-22 10:46 AM


            Thistledown Wind

Morning mist and bracing chill
give way to a fine azure cloak
of deep and formidable clouds
that wraps these endless hills
in a lovely mix of mellow shadows,
sunbeams, and many-colored leaves
dancing Autumn's tune
with the thistledown wind!

             --- b. e. adams (10/22/2010)



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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2010-10-22 11:53 AM


Nice autumn landscapes you've painted....
The thistledown wind is quite captivating, and makes for perfection in poetry.

Lovely work, dreampoet~

rebelrea
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since 2010-10-22
Posts 20
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2010-10-22 07:53 PM


Loved it, and the imagery that was in it. Short, but very very sweet.
Yuka
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since 2010-08-19
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china
3 posted 2010-10-23 05:59 AM


a piece of beautiful line drawing
as your works always to be

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
4 posted 2010-10-23 12:44 PM


love the pictures of Autumn. Fine writing.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2010-10-23 04:23 PM


This is the Autumn I love. Perfect.
                                 Ida

naturegirl
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since 2009-09-30
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England
6 posted 2010-10-24 07:32 PM


I can almost feel that chill...lovely description of the perfect autumn day

Nature, like a kind and smiling mother, lends herself to our dreams and cherishes our fancies.
Victor Hugo

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