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Open Poetry #46

Tick Tock

chylenedoney
Junior Member

since 2010-10-14

Posts 27
Idaho, USA

0 posted 2010-10-19 04:10 PM

Tick Tock Tick Tock Waiting for so long,

Tick Tock Tick Tock My patience is almost gone,

Tick Tock Tick Tock The clock moves too slow,

Tick Tock Tick Tock Nothing to do but go,

Tick Tock Tick Tock Round and Round,

Tick Tock Tick Tock No other sound,

Tick Tock Tick Tock beeps the alarm,

Tick Tock Tick Tock Times losing its charm,

Tick Tock Tick Tock Yes I know,

Tick Tock Tick Tock Ready, Set, Go!

Blackwidowgurl

Yuka
Member

since 2010-08-19

Posts 71
china

1 posted 2010-10-20 02:28 AM

lovely,charming, and smart

i really love your words, love the atmosphere of your describing

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2010-10-21 10:51 AM

interesting sense of slow motion captured here..enjoyed it...welcome to pip

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2010-10-26 06:16 PM

interesting piece!

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