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Open Poetry #46

Neglect

pinkfrog462
Junior Member

since 2010-09-24

Posts 26
Arizona

0 posted 2010-10-17 01:02 PM

Neglect

I feel as if I am out numbered

Out numbered by you

I try to keep up

And do all that you do

You always have to top me

Can never let me win

The moment I start

Is just when you begin

Just once let me tell you

What I need to say

And sit there and listen

Don't you betray

You say I'm your friend

But you won't let me in

I feel as if you

Only pretend

You like to put on a show

And leave me in dark

Everywhere I go

You leave your mark

For more poems visit my website at www.wordsbybeth.com

rebelrea
Junior Member

since 2010-10-22

Posts 20
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2010-10-23 06:19 PM

liked it a lot, right now theres someone thats doing the same thing to me, (he's actually my boyfriend) and i'm going to break up with him tonight.

but great job, loved it

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

2 posted 2010-10-23 06:23 PM

I liked the flow in this one

Zeitgeist

pinkfrog462
Junior Member

since 2010-09-24

Posts 26
Arizona

3 posted 2010-10-23 07:27 PM

thanks guys! sorry to hear about the boyfriend

For more poems visit my website at www.wordsbybeth.com

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

4 posted 2010-10-26 06:17 PM

Pain is a hard thing to write about but when captured well forces to reader to empathy

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