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0 posted 2010-10-25 07:29 AM



He was meter man
And she was meter maid.
She could write meter like nobody can
Sweeter than orange marmalade.
He was a rhymster
A nickle and dimester
A duck in a penny arcade.
He was a meter man...don't you know
And she was a meter maid.

She was a meter maid
He was a meter man.
She lines up verses in perfect parade,
Darned if I know how she can.
He's got the rhythm
It always goes with him
Constant as waves upon sand.
She was a meter maid...yes, she was
And he was a meter man.

He was a meter man.
She was a meter maid.
Words came forth flowing from two rhyming pens,
Soldiers in marching brigade.
It was their fashion
To post them at Passions
They never will stop, I'm afraid
For he is a meter man...through and through
And she is a meter maid.

© Copyright 2010 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2010-10-25 08:16 AM



Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2010-10-25 08:24 AM


Ah Michael. How wonderful to read you this morning. This was delightful!    

Liz, you are truly a woman of meter. How I loved to watch you out there on the porch in Cape Cod writing away. It's still such a wonderful scene in my mind.  

Love and thoughts are being sent along to our meter maid.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

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3 posted 2010-10-25 11:57 AM


Very nice 'Deer...
nice tribute and I am sure it will be appreciated


Martie
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4 posted 2010-10-25 12:18 PM


Thank you for reposting this Deer.  I'm sure it will make Liz smile as it did me.
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5 posted 2010-10-26 12:19 PM


How thoughtful of you to post this at this time, Michael.
                               Ida

Prasad Nataraj
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6 posted 2010-10-26 05:26 AM


fine writing as always.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

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7 posted 2010-10-26 07:16 AM


Love this picture of you Michael and am glad to read this posting since I am not sure I have seen it before.

Still keeping the meter maid in prayers today~~


M

Earl Brinkman
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8 posted 2010-10-26 06:08 PM


I am sure that readers are delighted to revisit this treat.  This being my first read I`ll have to read it again and again.
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