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BeyaK
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since 2008-08-07
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0 posted 2010-10-17 10:13 PM



Perception of Pain

I thought I cried it all
Thought my tears had dried up
Yet with these eyes, I see
A never ending rain that won’t stop.

A shattered heart I try to save
As I reassemble it back into whole
Praying for more strength to hold on
A soft whisper from a broken soul.

It hurts deeper than I thought
Felt like shards of broken glass
That I try to pick up each pieces
And fixing it to how it once was.

Somehow through it all
I managed to survive
With every pain, hurt and tears
It had made me felt more alive.

~~*K. B.*~~

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katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
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1 posted 2010-10-18 12:59 PM


I feel your pain in this one.
Kat >^..^<

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
2 posted 2010-10-22 05:25 AM


With every pain, hurt and tears
It had made me felt more alive.


You perceive pain beautifully. Enjoyed.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2010-10-22 07:13 AM


I really like how you refer to the broken heart like broken glass that's so hard to put back together again.

Very nice!

Eric

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