Open Poetry #46 |
Perception of Pain |
BeyaK Member
since 2008-08-07
Posts 126Philippines |
Perception of Pain I thought I cried it all Thought my tears had dried up Yet with these eyes, I see A never ending rain that won’t stop. A shattered heart I try to save As I reassemble it back into whole Praying for more strength to hold on A soft whisper from a broken soul. It hurts deeper than I thought Felt like shards of broken glass That I try to pick up each pieces And fixing it to how it once was. Somehow through it all I managed to survive With every pain, hurt and tears It had made me felt more alive. ~~*K. B.*~~ |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
I feel your pain in this one. Kat >^..^< |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
With every pain, hurt and tears It had made me felt more alive. You perceive pain beautifully. Enjoyed. -Trina. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I really like how you refer to the broken heart like broken glass that's so hard to put back together again. Very nice! Eric |
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