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Open Poetry #46

Mind is Gone

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

0 posted 2010-10-18 02:34 AM

I wrote me a song
A tale of a thong
No,no...this must be wrong
Bang the gong
As you can see, my mind is gone
To bed, yes to bed I belong
Goodnite, so-long
End of song

[This message has been edited by katahdin (10-18-2010 11:59 PM).]

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2010-10-18 07:19 PM

I didn't expect anyone to reply to this one. I was really tired and my brain was in a fog. Just to clarify "Bang the gong" means I'm done, it's over, drag me off the stage.
LOL! Kat >^..^<

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2010-10-21 07:27 PM

Where's the tale of the thong...James

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

3 posted 2010-10-22 05:23 AM

Ah, is this one of those "I-can't-sleep-so-i'll-write-something" pieces?? (no offense intended

) Even so, I enjoyed your uhhh..."conversation" with yourself. I'm very restless so I'm happy I'm not the only one who writes of conversations I've had with myself in the dead of the night. Really enjoyed this.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2010-10-22 07:14 AM

Good night sleep tight.......Whatever sleep tight really means??

I enjoyed the smile.

Eric

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