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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Now Abandoned, A voice whispered, All you have left is a poem …and she choked On what lay unborn. . © 10/2010 KRJ For a friend |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
oh my~~~ there is anguish indeed in this... and a sense of loss... I wish the best for your friend... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Strangely enough, my friend, this was penned some years ago and just recently resurfaced. Eerie little things like this just continue to happen, but for some reason, I'm not really surprised, as this is timely, and apparently wasn't to have been shared so many years ago.  Thank you for your wonderful eyes. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
synchronisity? unto all things there is a season...? Things written at some moment in time are often best appreciated later, sometimes with more meaning than we thought when written. Perhaps it is the universal experiences that survive as rlevent in writing, with moments and the passing crisis of the moment, less easily understood by those who were not there or do not understand the context. in any event ma'am, you've penned in my opinion something that speaks to the poets and even hacks like me.... letting us know in very concise terms how loss and anguish can feel... well done m'friend |
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Didymus Junior Member
since 2008-05-01
Posts 33USA |
Very fine! Life like friends lives are non-linear ahead then back down then up side to other side I, for one, must always keep in mind right here right now is all we have |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
This is very poignant and memorable. It can be said that life ia a poem that transcends our (relatively) weak terrestrial-form imagination. Or, if this is interpreted as a plea to one's muse while under duress, what a lovely way to resume writing from the heart! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
what is not said speaks so loudly, Karilea. strangely, eerie little things are happening... is a special time of year approaching? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~~~ooooh~~my~~~ jarring~~~to the soul, indeed~~ |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
Real soul speaking here. Loved it. Z. |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Once again to the the very core my friend. hugs! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Understanding this and appreciating my poet sister very much.  |
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