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Open Poetry #46

thoughts along her eyes

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2010-10-12 08:18 PM

She was quiet like the piano that sat in the dark,
Slightly folding her legs onto the wood works of the small-breasted room.

You could look through the dozens of boroughs,
The tunnels that flaunted the cars and people of the neighboring streets,
Silent windows creaked, dipped their small reflections
Off the round of her cheek
Off to the dirt paved road where her small little harness
Hung from the tree along her yard

She was the faintest call of morning,
Where one wakes up to the sound of light,
Straightening their thoughts as they board their train,
Straightening their tie, and as they slowly look up,
That one slow glance, that one quick take,
You'll notice the skin of her dress
Slightly bristling along the airy streets.

You'll notice her, but only when it's too late,
Only when her eyes decide to catch yours,
Catch your scent for a woman she is, a woman of her heart.

[This message has been edited by Tomer (10-14-2010 09:48 AM).]

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

1 posted 2010-10-12 11:02 PM

A patchwork riddle, thank you... and a tale of the lingering beauty almost hidden in postmodern suburbia, thank you even more.

So many ties---guess it wasn't Casual Friday.

Yuka
Member

since 2010-08-19

Posts 71
china

2 posted 2010-10-13 02:08 AM

a quiet describer, love it
you may become a good novelist

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2010-10-13 08:18 PM

Thanks, Easy...happy you enjoyed. Hope all is well.

Cheers

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2010-10-13 08:18 PM

Thanks, Yuka....happy you enjoyed

Tomer

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