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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2010-10-11 06:15 PM

~*~

The cool night sky circles in dreams
and leaves turn to a warm autumn glow
scattered starlight's shine a soft light
rendezvousing
with love in the fall
stirring beneath the eaves.

~*~

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2010-10-11 11:02 PM

most pleasant Autumnal Romantic imagery!

very well penned !!

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

2 posted 2010-10-12 12:57 PM

Very nice.

It's been awhile since I've pondered starlight through a yellowed leaf, but you bring it back here. Would those be finches nesting under the eaves?

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2010-10-12 01:07 AM

love you poetry

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2010-10-12 03:11 AM

You certainly have a way with words, Blues. This really captures the spirit of Autumn.
Ida

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2010-10-12 06:47 AM

yes, you capture the imagery and the feel of Autumn...
a beautiful piece ma'am.. I enjoyed

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

6 posted 2010-10-12 09:06 AM

Lovely, enjoyed-ebm

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2010-10-12 09:17 AM

babyblue...you do fall nicely!!

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

8 posted 2010-10-12 12:46 PM

A lovely piece of writing, Blues. Enjoyed the imagery.

~Sunkissed

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

9 posted 2010-10-12 06:24 PM

Love in the Fall....Beautiful.

-Trina.

There are places in the heart that do not yet exist; suffering has to enter in for them to come to be - LeonBloy

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2010-10-13 09:36 AM

Thank you one and all~~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2010-10-13 10:55 AM

Delightful, dear Lori! Welcoming the season with you in this colorful, enticing atmosphere.

Love,
Margherita

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