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Open Poetry #46

Don't Take It Away

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2010-10-10 11:31 AM

Don't Take It Away
Don't take it away
Don't take your love away
Follow your heart
Along the way
Find your love
Find your answers
Make it happen
Take it away
Love can happened
Once when you get your love
Don't break your heart
This is your love
Listen to your heart
Make it happened
Let us make it
Through this journey
Don't take it away

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2010-10-11 09:48 AM

A very intense plea of love, dear Vandana!

Love,
Margherita

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2010-10-11 07:08 PM

The uncertainty bites, big time!!

Hugs, vandana~

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2010-10-12 05:06 AM

makes me think about, thanks for the pertinent and helpful words,

regards

yann

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2010-10-12 10:56 AM

pleading for what we do not wish to lose...and is so fragile to begin with..

heartfelt, this plea...

Gumpy
Member

since 2007-11-06

Posts 143
Canada

5 posted 2010-10-26 12:11 PM

I have missed your reads Vandana. Well done. I'm glad to have visited again.
Gumpy

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2010-10-26 10:11 PM

Journeys are sometimes very hard to make alone...
it seems easier at times to share those hardships
with someone who understands;

yet, sometimes, we must make a journey alone...
so be careful what you wish for.

Well done, Vandana. You make people think!

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