Havana's Night (lune haiku 2nd version)

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Open Poetry #46

Havana's Night (lune haiku 2nd version)

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

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0 posted 2010-10-05 05:31 PM

The night air was warm
was it you
that remind me of havana

I never been there before
only my father
my soul could not explain

Yet I desire no answer
let me believe
that I was there tonight

Staring at clouds, stars, moonlight
remembering the rhythm
something left within the bloodline

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

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1 posted 2010-10-06 08:16 AM

I enjoyed this very much! ebm

pinkfrog462
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since 2010-09-24

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2 posted 2010-10-06 01:31 PM

gave me such a mystical visual...very nice!

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ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

3 posted 2010-10-07 04:29 PM

Thank you for reading and your comment Ebm. I'm very happy that you enjoyed it.

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

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4 posted 2010-10-07 04:31 PM

Also thank you Pinkfrog426 I'm glad you could picture it perfectly and for commenting on it.

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