Analyzing her French Toast

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howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2010-10-05 12:56 PM

officer :

                         Eve’s jeans were a little less than perfect

                         which was unusual

partner :

                         what about her  cuisuine?

officer :

                         you mean the pinto beans and greens?

                         delicious

detective :

                         i assume Howard's culinary touch was vicious as usual

officer :

                         it was

detective :

                           well this looks pretty nutricious to me

                           lets tell the captain

                                                           [later]

partner :

                           so you see captain

                           these guys are no typical cooks

                           they’re born and bred

                           to crumble over each other’s cornbread

lieutenant :

                           and you checked the Olive Garden?

officer :

                           we did

captain :

                           good job guys

                           i have to admit

                           i’m impressed

                           it was pretty ambitious of you two

                           solving this case by yourselves

partner :

                           thanks captain

officer :

                           thanks captain

                                              [after they leave]

captain :

                            so what do you think?

lieutenant :

                            a pair of silly olives

                            if you ask me

captain :

                            i’m not sure i’m buying it

lieutenant :

                            why not

captain :

                            well Howard has a sweet tooth

                            he’s famous for it

                            so where are the desserts?

                            and then you have all this sweet poetry handed to her without her at least trying it

                            i don’t know

lieutenant :

                            so you’re saying we should be talking the the guys at the International House of Pancakes?

captain :

                            i’m saying maybe we should be talking the guys at Coffee and Chocolate

                                                          [lieutenant whistles]

                            i’ll get a pot of coffee

                                                                                                 love,

                                                                                                 eve & howard

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2010-10-09 06:33 PM

I happen to be a big fan of this style...and how it leaves the reader to take it for nonsense or for something that lies deeper...
you carry it off well...
I look forward to the next

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

2 posted 2010-10-10 05:06 PM

That was an interesting trip. I'm not sure where I went, but it was an enjoyable ride all the same. Now can you please pass the syrup?

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