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D.Lester Young
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0 posted 2010-10-02 08:13 AM


Poetic Abrasion Reflection

The intertwining weave wears abstractions, contractions
Upon the friction of paper cut abrasion confessions,
Where grains drain the hourglass half empty, half full.
The east in the west, migrating
North in the south circumspection,
Tick tock, teeter-totter, drip drop gravity of Uni-Verse,
Cerebral mental wings of hemispheres flight incarnate
Character manifestation of threads that test gray matter
Torn asunder the living suicide pieces of kneeling survival.

Seed that furrows the tears flood water into saline salty sees,
Shore lines trailing footprints upon the tide of why knots.
Twisted intertwined washed away on sails of wrinkled pages.
That yellow with age in teeth biting the flakes of terse rhyme
With reasons to weather the leather belt expansion, reduction,
That girth width girdle of conformity and skinny dipping bare show nudity
That verse that writes the storm sword point tattered torn shredded,
Spread upon black and blue scarred trails and tribulations turmoil
Bearing the reining high blood pressure boiling in personal trials
Navigation the poetic abrasion of time - tired and drained.

David Lester Young 10/01/10

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Margherita
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1 posted 2010-10-03 08:52 AM


Love your reflections here. You have a unique style that finds my appreciation.

Love,
Margherita

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03
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2 posted 2010-10-04 08:59 AM


Ditto that! enjoyed. ebm
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