Open Poetry #46 |
a thousand dreams away |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a thousand dreams away falling leaves and drifting clouds cross a patch of deep azure sky framed in the pristine multicolored, branching beauty of this proud and ancient forest, that dances in an Autumn breeze. here, one brief moment of grand respite may be stolen from the infinite depths of time by all for whom ‘home’ remains forever... a thousand dreams away. --- b. e. adams (9/25/2010) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now tell me why is it, friend, that no one [who doesn't write] can't quite conceive the notions of a dreamer? But you? You're never second-hand anything. Always first rate, and while I'm at it? Top shelf. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
I agree with Sunshine! Enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I've also got to agree with Sunshine. Perhaps it takes a thousand dreams before we believe it? Helen |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Yep, How could one possibly improve on Sunshine's exceptional and true comment? Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Nostalgia for Home will last forever ... Enjoyed this feeling you convey so beautifully. Love, Margherita |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
I concur with the others that Sunshine said it best...ditto, ditto, ditto! ebm |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
what a beautiful picture you paint..thank you for sharing |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This reads like a prayer to me. I admire your work a great deal, you always capture so much. |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
This was wonderful. I've read and reread and each time I like it more. ooxx Marti
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
You paint a beautiful picture here. So serene and peaceful. lovely words indeed. ~Sunkissed |
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