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Eusta B. Mae
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0 posted 2010-10-01 12:26 PM




Driftwood decorates the lawn
Covered with dew
Passed out on the grass
Shimmering with the dawn

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2010-10-01 12:30 PM


a fitting coninuation of the piece...
the mystery remains how she got from sea and sand to to lawn.. :-)

enjoyed your take on driftwood ma'am..

Eusta B. Mae
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2 posted 2010-10-01 12:38 PM


Cpat (smiling)I'd ask her but I doubt she remembers... Thanks for the eyes and words sir. ebm
Misty Lilacs
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3 posted 2010-10-01 04:35 PM


Fabulous! The lawn must reach down to the sea or there was a very bad storm and she was thrown on the lawn??

Marti

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4 posted 2010-10-01 07:40 PM


Hurricanes....

must be from hurricanes...that, or an extremely volitile tornado that took a piece of wood, dumped it in a stream, allowed it to depress, and then flung it out again...

Continue, my friend.

D.Lester Young
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5 posted 2010-10-02 08:12 AM


Drift words of your that damns in others, very nice.
Margherita
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6 posted 2010-10-03 08:57 AM


Oh, what a rebirth at dawn!

Perfect!

Love,
Margherita

Eusta B. Mae
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7 posted 2010-10-04 08:28 AM


Wow everybody! I am both humbled and delighted with your responses to Driftwood.  There is more to come.  Hugs to you all! Eusta
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