Open Poetry #46 |
![]() ![]() |
Bones First Morning On The Farm |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania ![]() |
The green hands of the clock say it’s five o’clock in the morning. Bones can’t see it because he’s asleep. Bones awakes with a start to a pain across his shoulder blades. The farmer has a belt in one hand, and Bones hair in the other. Bones is dragged off the cot. “Get up you lazy piece of garbage, get up and eat breakfast.” Bones is led downstairs, there’s sausage and pan cakes for breakfast. Bones never had a breakfast like that or any other type of breakfast at Mom’s. He thinks it might be all right here. After breakfast, Bones is led out to the barn. The farmer hands him a shovel, pulls a big steel cart suspended from a rail above the trough behind where the cows stand, and tells Bones to shovel the cow manure into the cart. Bones tries, but the first shovel full is too heavy, and he gets the manure all over himself. The farmer has a switch, and gives Bones a swat across the back, tells Bones to be more careful. Bones does better with the next shovel full. After the trough is cleaned of manure, the farmer pushes the cart out to the manure pile, and unloads it. Bobby |
||
© Copyright 2010 Robert E. Jordan - All Rights Reserved | |||
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sounds like the farm is n ot much better than the streets..Bones seems to get the short end of the stick, or shovel, in either place. Nicely done, Bobby ![]() |
||
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Balladeer, I'm glad that you enjoyed the read. Thanks for the kind comment. In private conversations with Bones, I have discovered that he much preferred life on the streets to life on the farm. He was somewhat out of place in the rural environment. Bobby |
||
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I don't know how much longer I can read of Bones' life. It makes me terribly sad. Makes me wanna take him in and show him that some people really are good. It breaks my heart. |
||
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Passing shadows, For your kind words and concern for Bones. At present, Bones is doing very well. Love Bobby/Bones |
||
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Bobby, this is a painful experience and something never to be forgotten, unfair and stupid. Thanks for sharing this piece of life. regards yann |
||
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, You have hit the nail on the head. It was very unfair and stupid. Bobby |
||
Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Bones always seems to be up to his neck in the manure of life, no matter where he is, poor kid. Ida |
||
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, That's the way it is for some folks. Life is very much a dice roll, and there's very little that can be done about that. Love Bobby |
||
viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Life is rough, but bones had an especially rough one. I'm no cook, but i'm fairly sure I know how to make waffles. Bones can come over. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
||
latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
It brings back the stories of all the city children who were put on trains to live and work on farms because the parents just could not feed them. And that was here in the United States not somewhere in the eastern countries. We went though a lot of bad stuff here. I knew a woman who was one of those children. Most never did get to know who their familes were. Some did better than others.But Poor Bones hit the wrong family. There must be a few books written about those days, I do read your stories Bobby. latrarrival |
||
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Paul, For the kind offer of waffles. Now you’ve gone and made Bones hungry, he is especially fond of waffles. Bobby |
||
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Latearrival, I'm very pleased that you read my stories, and can relate to them. The "good old days" never existed anywhere, and still don't. Love Bobby |
||
Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
These Bones poems sure are a treat to read. I feel sorry for Bones though. |
||
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Earl, I'm glad you like the Bones story. It was a bad time for Bones. Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (04-28-2010 09:07 AM).] |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |