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I Probably Won't Make It
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I Probably Won't Make It |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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It's been thirteen days and it will be ten more. I want to say I'll make it even though I'm on the floor crawling, bawling, sprawling, scrawling love poems that keep me sore. See, it's low fifties now at night and this kind of cold gets to the bone. I don't think I can take it, still, I will say I'll make it, even though I'm dying here alone. I try not to think about you or look at pictures for long. But the tinge of desperation lingers and pounces upon my fingers as I turn a poem into a song. I suppose that's the reason I busted the guitar. I just couldn't take it, probably won't make it very far. |
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Yuka Member
since 2010-08-19
Posts 71china |
you will make it , i believe |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
passing shadows-Just breathe sweetie..just keep on breathing.  ebm |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes, breathe and hold on... I am sure you will..... make it. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Solitude in fall adds to the melancholy of nature's performance. You write so intensely, dear Dixie. Of course you are going to make it. Always walk for a while in the sun when it comes out, it will brighten your day, while you wait. Love, Margherita  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Of course you will make it, get wrapped up and get out into the weather and wilderness and describe what you see, give us the window on your world. We can see by poems such as this that you can write great poetry, now transform the outside to the the inside..of our brains and tell us the changing colours, the wind, the sky,water, the sounds, the touch, the taste, let us visualise your world, then stand back and admire your masterpiece....thanks for this one... Goldenrose. Friendship is Love without his wings. Lord Byron. |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
good advice...even on my darkest days a sudden low burst of sunlight,a tiny bird singing, a late butterfly is a great pick me up. A great poem, thanks for sharing. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*touching the screen* |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Face it, guitars bust too easy. Thanks for the write! An appreciated read. |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Dixie, I am sending you hugs and good thoughts. I know you will make it!! ooxx Marti |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
The cold that goes all the way to the bones that is the worse kind....by yourself a body pillow with a picture of him on it ..... hope he returns soon!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Nice poem and I think that you will probably make it given some time. Hang in there. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dixie girl...cold...and heat can make people crazy stupid. But you still beat the sound of those sensations into a good poem! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
I do so enjoy your poetry my friend, thank you for sharing. Rick |
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